AWWW BEST THING EVER ON FICTIONPRESS!

Omg the redshirt reframe ISAAC I LOVE YOU!

God i love her she is a girl after my own heart .i would be that happy too

wow this was great, your till one of my favorite writers ever!

You should make another story, or series of stories, for Isaac and Err, please!

Okay, multiple things,

1- FUCK YES! LOVE THE FUCKING END OF THE CHAPTER

2- FUCK YESX2! ISAAC AND ERR! I LOVE YOU!

3- WHERE THE FUCK IS DARREN? NEVERMIND, I DON'T CARE, ISAAC AND ERR! HELL YES!

4- YOU SHOULD MAKE A SPIN-OFF OR WHATEVER WHEN THIS IS OVER IF YOU DON'T PUT ERR AND ISAAC TOGETHER IN THIS STORY, WHICH YOU SHOULDN'T, ISAAC&ERR AS ITS OWN STORY WOULD BE AS EPIC AND AWESOME AND AMAZING AS FUCK.

-BE

Sorry I haven't reviewed so far, I started university in September and it's been crazy! However I have finished my first assignment so I'm relaxing a bit more now :)

I love the plot line and the writing is brilliant as ever. I have noticed a few mistakes such as in chapter 31, "her face pale as her gorge rose"- it sounds like a mistake made by predictive text or something and I'm not really sure what's meant to be there instead XD

either that or I'm being a bit dumb today...

anyway, a very enjoyable story and I can't wait to read more :D

Becca

SWEET!

UPDATE SOON PLEASE, I BEG OF YOU.

THis is nice :)