Very introspective. It was interesting to watch the "zoom in." I like how you didn't stop when you wrote of your dreams. Some people believe that a person's dreams make them who they are, but that's not really so.

"They do not see the person inside of me,

Longing to be seen.

Wanting recognition."

Candid and poignant. - M.T.

I liked how you made the population around you smaller and smaller, but even then, no one 'saw' you. so sad! I hope college has changed that perspective!

Nice poem. Your very good at writing poetry!

Sorry for the late review! ^^ Pretty nice poem!!! I see u!^^

Nice story. I just love how with each stanza you take in a smaller portion of the world, all the way down to your classmates. I too have felt this a lot ..like... every day ;)