Ok, this review is actually for Chapter 6 but apparently since I've already reviewed that one (the old one, which you deleted) I can't review again.

I'm sooo glad you were talking about the whole "moving" thing ;) I think, somehow, talking about things makes you feel better so I hope that it did here :D

You're a great writer. I love your style and I can't wait for more!

OH MY GOD. I am so sad I didn't read this earlier! :( I wish you would have one more chapter...just one, very very small one perhaps?

On another note, I can't wait for you to start your new story :) You know which one :D

Great journal here by the way. Seriously awesome!

So the whole time I was reading this I kept asking myself, "what the point of this piece was." I kept waiting for something to happen, like he was gonna get beat up or something along those lines for telling on his friend. But I just kept reading because the way you wrote it was very interesting to me. And then i read the last line and was like. Wow! LOL I really liked it it was strange to me, but in a good way. Good job

oh and another note. I probably wouldn't have said "this is based on a true story" at the start (ps i didn't see that when i first read it lol) but just because after that last line you know its true and it makes you say "OHHHH" I thought it was cool. Just a suggestion though.