|Reviews for Doodling Blind|
| Sepulchred 11/10/11 . chapter 1
I like this best, I think. It's so cute, and the tone, well, I'm reading it like I would a nursery rhyme. I also love the little death touch. What bothers me is the 'to my disbelief and my fear' bit. Technically nothing wrong with it; it just sounds odd.