|Reviews for All the Bitter Songs|
| Anehalia 5/23/13 . chapter 12
Sorry it took so long for me to review. It's awesome seeing more chapters come out on this story. I enjoy reading this, and I love the interactions between your characters.
| Cloudy Glass 5/22/13 . chapter 12
Yay! I was hoping you hadn't abandoned this story. I've really enjoyed reading Ives' journey, even more than Amy and Nikita's. Sometimes I can't make heads or tails of Manda. She seems so mousy and then she'll flat-out hit Nikita. It throws me off. BUT, I'm so glad you posted. :) Thanks for sharing your work!
| AnonymousReads 5/22/13 . chapter 12
Yay a new update. I love Nikita and Amy. I can't wait to see what will happen in this next chapter. Update soon. Please. :)
| DuchessYappingDog 5/21/13 . chapter 12
Woohoo! Finally some progress between Nikita and Amy. I don't quite remember, but were they trying to wait a year to see if they still want to be with each other?
Ives really does seem like a cat that preens himself. Hahaha, didn't know he was so much of a peacock. I hope he is able to work through more of his issues and make progress with Manda. I wonder what's gotten her undies in a twisty. Maybe she's still on edge around Nikita for what happened in the bus... Fighting her attraction towards her.
I was wondering if you had a model in mind for how Ives looks? For some reason, I have a middle aged man who is blond and balding... even though he is supposed to be a hot stud. Maybe because he sounds like such an old bitter man, I imagine an exterior to match that, hahaha.
| jumping for joy 5/21/13 . chapter 12
ahhhhhhhh! that was an amazing story! i'm legit reading this and the other story 1,000,000 times. please update soon!
| aliaschantra 5/21/13 . chapter 12
Yay! Nikita and Amy! So happy!
Manda needs some love from Ives. She's just feeling neglected.
But yay! Amy and Nikita! haha..
| AnonymousReads 5/19/13 . chapter 11
Please don't wait months to update again I really want to know how this story is going to end. I loved 100 love letters and I bet once this story's finished it will be just as good. Update soon. Please. :)
| blakbird0019 5/18/13 . chapter 11
Hi :) I've read this story and your 100 Love Letters story, and I haven't reviewed :P Sorry, trying to break that habit haha. Um, so I liked both stories, though I think I'm liking this one better. Don't know why really haha. Anyway, I'm mainly reviewing right now because I saw this mistake in this chapter and it kind of bugged me. I looked through the comments and no one said anything about it.
"Ives shrugged. 'I'm not really into the party scene anymore.' He glanced at the hallway towards the stage. full length tour with us, so we'll probably cross paths again.'"
I think you can see there that you cut something out :P Sorry if I seem like a jerk or something haha. I just figured this was something you needed to know. Overall, I think this story's going fine, just a few grammatical errors here and there. Just stuff that you need to carefully proofread over and fix. It's not anything that really detracts from the story.
| LDSDreamer 5/17/13 . chapter 11
Yay you updated! I hope you are doing good. :) And I really liked the story! Maybe because it's Ives and I love him to bits. But yeah. Made my day when I saw the notification that itwas updated in my inbox :)
| akaCHEEKS 5/15/13 . chapter 11
I love it! Thank you for writing this for us!
| Eloyse 5/15/13 . chapter 11
I'm really enjoying this story, no matter how frequent (or infrequent) the updates are! I was though way too excited when you mentioned their next stop on the tour and immediately thought of Amy. I loved 100 Love Letters and am enjoying the bits that are following up with that story line but am really enjoying Ives and Manda in this story as well. Happy writing, whenever you get the chance! :)
| sandcastlesinthesand 5/14/13 . chapter 11
OH MY GODDDDD
THE MOMENT WHEN MANDA FALLS ONTO IVES BECAUSE OF THE DEER OF COURSE I LOVE THAT MOMENT THE BEST
AND SHE IS READING THE HOBBIT
AND THE GUY FLIRTING WITH IVES
AND THE HOT CHOCOLATE MIX YOU HAVEN'T FORGOTTEN THE HOT CHOCOLATE MIX
I AM SO EXCITED
IM HAPPY YOURE BACK
| Anaeli 1/5/13 . chapter 10
Awesome! Update asappp please! :)
| I love this 12/21/12 . chapter 10
I read 100 Love Letters and it was amazing! I was so happy when I found out you wrote a sequel :)
I love this so far... I can't wait to read more :) Hopefully we'll see more of what happened between Nikita and Amy.. :)
| akaCHEEKS 11/3/12 . chapter 10
Yay! An update! Now I'm curious why Manda left in such a hurry. I hope you had fun during Halloween in Disneyland!