Oh WOW, this was truly captivating! Even though I don't know anything about religion this still mesmerized me to no end! Love this, you're a great writer! I hope to read much more of your works!

That was... poeticly lovely and it made me cry, I had a friend who was a exconvict and she fell in love with our priestess, I almost cried when I had found her body in our home... thank you though for this story. I have always had a problem with happy endings.

Powerful i mean really i enjoyed it a lot.

Made me cry. A couple of spelling errors e.g. Pray instead of prey, but I loved it anyway. Thank you )

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I'm still trying to get over the goosebumps on my skin. The story was absolutely great, probably one of the kind of stories I've been desperately trying to spot on this site. 'Twas a sad ending, though, but I couldn't deny the fact that it was the perfect ending.

I'm considerably a sadistic one, huh?

Now, if you'll excuse me, I need to check out your other stories, and try my very best not to want more; although, I have a strong feeling I would fail, seeing as that I've fallen completely in love with your writing style.

One comment, though. I think you use the ellipses too much, but other than that, I think your writing's just beautiful.