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NessieWinsa 8/5/12 . chapter 5Awesome chapter, like always. Especially loved the part where he "threatens" Charon that he'll find out about the deal on his own. That scene basically defines their relationship, I imagine! I wonder who Charon's younger sister is and if she'll become a character we get to know. WRITE MORE. DO IIIIT! -Ness :3 |
Leyla 7/30/12 . chapter 5 Such a good story! Good plot and dialouge. However, you should add more details for the setting and you should go in greater depth describing the characters. |
graphiteXVII 7/30/12 . chapter 5Thanks! Great thanks. Autolycus badass. This is a long chapter, and refreshing too. Good luck for the next chapter! I'll be reading! :) |
NessieWinsa 4/28/12 . chapter 1This is great! The only correction you should make is the "there" in "They're taking new students..." which should be "they are" or "they're". I'm starting to like the main character. A little mischiviousness is always a good character trait for a story. |
Touch-ed 3/7/12 . chapter 4 Please update soon.. :[ |
graphiteXVII 1/31/12 . chapter 4thanks for the update! we have been waiting for ages, numerous ages. but still, thanks! nice story, but it i think is too slow-paced. i hope you shed some light to us soon. :) we'll follow, i'll be reading! :) |
jasminesurf 1/22/12 . chapter 4Nice story :) |
graphiteXVII 1/11/12 . chapter 3We guys are waiting for your update. :( |
Panchaali 12/15/11 . chapter 3Nice! Update soon. |
Panchaali 12/15/11 . chapter 2Another good chapter.I am totally getting into the story now...well instead of Percy Jackson,son of Poseidon..the son of Hermes is hero in your story-who stole the lightening bolt of Zeus...well here he steals spear of Ares...interesting plot! Loved the way you have made villain a hero... loving THE THIEF DEMIGOD. |
Panchaali 12/15/11 . chapter 1Nice writing...but I almost know nothing about Greek Gods! Came to know about some after watching Percy Jackson and The lightening Bolt... |
graphiteXVII 12/12/11 . chapter 2i'm excited about this. continue writing! |
graphiteXVII 12/12/11 . chapter 1hehe.. you write really nice |
Snev 12/5/11 . chapter 2 Love it! Can't wait for more! ;) |
Snev 12/5/11 . chapter 1 Love it! ;) I was laughing. I think I broke down by the first paragraph... it's quite like Percy Jackson really, but I guess that's basically just his backdrop, isn't it? Then things are going to just get really interesting and just amazingly fun and jolly! |