I love ur references to OZ!

I loved it! The imagery was superb and I liked the pace of it. You've changed how I've seen this classic but in a very clever and good way. I really loved it and I looked the metaphors you used to hint at the characters, very nice! I loved it and I think it turned out very well! Think I'll fave it now.

Good description, nice rhymes, put together excelently, all in all, a good piece of work.