hi :) u have been doing an amazing job writing their story amazing ideas and freaking awesome story line so update soon :D

SG

Since Amy's avatar is a sun goddess, does that mean that she could be Amaterasu? The sun goddess if the Shinto religion?

AMAZING I love it and I'm only on chapter 2!

Cool story. Welcome to our community the tales of Asgard!

Excellent beginning. I really like the story so far, and you do a good job of setting up the seperate characters. I also like how each character is attacked by a seperate element. I think later on they might gain powers that correspond to those elements.

Hope you continue to update! I'm looking foreword to reading the rest of it.

Reminds me of the Percy Jackson series, but I still like it.

UPDATE SOON PLEASE!

Okay this is just plain awsome! I love it. The grammar is great, sentance fluency good, and the plot is amazing. Plz update soon!

sounds good to me i'll be waiting for more

Generally good, well edited. Your decision to censor certain words is disappointing, though. You've named one character 'Marc' and another character 'Marcus'. That is bound to be confusing, especially in later chapters. You also have three character whose names start with the letter, M. I mean no disrespect, but that seems very unoriginal, as if you just opened a book called "Baby names-Section M!"

You've left nice cliffhangers at the end of every section, but each section is very small, averaging 1000 words or so. Personally, you should have gotten each character their own 1500 word chapter introduction rather than only 1000 words. This makes it a bit easier to read, and characters are introduced much slower.

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