Why haven't you been updating? Shame! This is too good too be left unfinished, seriously, write more.

Please?

there is an inconsistency in the story on this chapter at the end, the first stealing incident was a week ago, not two days. Great story anyway and cant wait for more.

This is really good and it's good you started in now. I'm glad it will be done in time for the holidays. It's great so far. But I wonder why Dan threw up...?