Great job. You got loads of emotion across. I agree with Dark Blue Lover with the line "But now as the light falls on us, I know you were never mine to hold." its a great line :-D

Again, a text I really like _

Blunt but true, I can kinda relate to this. Love these lines:

"Do we really just want to save face and save our own necks in all this? - Either way I know I will not win with you, not because I am weak but because I have stopped playing the childish games which distract me from what's really important."

"But now as the light falls on us, I know you were never mine to hold."

Excellent job! Hope you keep writing :)

Got ur feelings out :D greet one :)