I love it. I love the way it's from each person's point of view. I love it. Please publish you're work! Xxx

There are so many times I wish I could turn back time and do things over again.

This was a wonderful poem. Really good, as always. :-)

Wow, the emotion in this is great. I would love to know what inspired it. This has the comforting sense of being relatable despite the harsh sounds and violence that seem to want to be off-putting. Well done.

This is a great piece of writing!

Weirdly the style reminds me of how I write poetry instead of your usual rhythym, especially the way you ended it, but that's not why I like it.

The message is really deep, and I feel everyone can relate to the concept of regrets that underlies the entirity of the written word.

I'm a tad confused on the flow. Are all the situations related, or is it three seperate groups of people (stanza one, stanza two, stanza three their own scenario). I only ask because each is so different with the first being household like, the second having a kidnap/murder vibe, and the third sounding like a painful breakup. I could be completely off base, but thats the vibes I got.

Anyway, I really liked the concept, as I said before I and many others have pondered what a life is without regret. Keep Writing!

Ah, we all ruminate from time to time about the things we wish we could turn back time on. The only thing I would change is to get rid of the comma on 'And plaice it back, upon the mantle?' It flows easier without the pause. Well done!

This is great, love the imagery.

i love it! i think this sort off reflects on what some people think after like a bad break in a relationship or a fight. they always think if i could turn back time would it make a difference?

Wow...

Things wouldn't change, I guess. But this is still a great piece of work. "It's the second glance... That carves it into memories." Definitely relatable.

Despite this being a "what would be if"-piece, it's kind of emotional and unique. I like that! :-)

Just a small question, but... did you maybe mean "soles of my feet" in the fourth line from the last? "Souls" (like psyche) - must say that's an interesting thought, and in an odd way fitting into that, but I still think you didn't mean to write that... correct me if I'm wrong. :-)

I'm crying after reading this. I just think this is so emotional and by far your best piece yet! Those words created great imagery and I really got vivid images from it. It is so sad and I want to relate this to a little girl who is reliving the night her parents split. I dunno if that was what you based this poem on but I still think its fantastically sad! :)