This really put a smile on my face. You did really well with this, and I loved the repetition.

It was also nice that this was quite short. I'm one of these people who can't write a short story for the life of me. :( Good luck with anything else you write and keep going. :)

Katie.

Hahaha! XD I don't know. I just wanna laugh. If my interpretation of this poem is correct, then I must say, you really did a good job! Reminds me of my parents...am I on the right track?

FeyerahKE ;D