I admire the teenager's reckless curiosity and I especially enjoyed the peculiar analogies and creative metaphors throughout the story. Epic!

Yay! :) Love Lia. She. Is. Epic. :) Thank you! (so glad you included the sunglasses! Loved the bit about the demonic things she's done. I imagine that Lia has so much fun being a demon... Oh, and the "act like a shirt" bit. That's awesome. How do you come up with these things?) Unfortunately, I didn't spot the Terry Pratchett quotes, but I'm assuming they're not in the end bit, because judging from the Terry Pratchett books I've read, he just doesn't do romance. Or anything like it... :) Unless it's the bit about the trees and the summer house. That seemed a little random... But then what's wrong with a bit of randomness? Exactly. Nothing. :)

Hahahahaha Oh goodness xD that story was really funny, i didn't exactly get the ending part but i did enjoy the demons trick lol "SUCKER" haha that was great xD