|Reviews for Red Eye Brigade: Among Demons Saga|
| Psykofreac 3/22/13 . chapter 5
Keeps getting better, I can't wait to catch up. Though I am spotting quite a few grammatical errors which are common mistakes a lot of people make but still not up to standard. Just remember when using words that are meant to be contractions, at least imagine the two separate words first, then put the apostrophe where it belongs.
You're You are
Your / You are
| Psykofreac 3/20/13 . chapter 3
Amazing chapter! Definitely better than most stories here. I really like Morphan and Harry so far and their friendship. The fight might have been a little long though but still cool.
| Psykofreac 3/20/13 . chapter 2
LOL had some good laughs this chapter. I'll read more and keep up the good work.
| Ahniya-sama 11/6/12 . chapter 1
Great! I also have a story whose main character is a half demon, but don't worry Cox the concept is really different, its title is carcer x, please read if you have time...
first of all, I find the story interesting, and I'll see if it will get even better in the next chapter, which I'm about to read,hehe.. so.. I hope he's strong and bad ass , by the way, his name is really cute :)
| Richard Omega 3/26/12 . chapter 2
seems like an interesting story, although you could detail the main character Morphan more, like how high he is, how much he weight, his age, hairstyle, and color of both hair, and eyes, including how he dress, the same goes with harry crax. if the reader wants to interact with the character they need to at least know how the character looks like :). Hope this tip helps you improve more XD
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