Amazing

Love what you did changing the forment and makes it much easier, your so talented with your writing, and I really feel the carectors alot, your deffenetly on my fav list. Senserly Anonymous Rider.

This is good :) You might just want to check the spelling errors in the synopsis

the placement isn't right but the story plot is really good, but give Lisa's mother a name, and keep writing but put more stage directions in it and forment it right then it's perfect.

Although I enjoy reading plays-I have written a few myself and don't know where they are-this one has alot of grammatical and spelling errors. You should get a beta-reader to help you out! But keep up the good work hun!