|Reviews for I Am Barely Standing|
| BookcraZzaY 11/27/11 . chapter 1
This is so sad...I don't want them to die or wither away
I love the crayon Comparison it's just so sad
Especially at the end when they colespe
It's like a freaky hallucination!
| Mylilblackpen 11/19/11 . chapter 1
This is beautiful and I love the crisp clear and blunt imagery you use! Superb! I can totally relate to this in the context of obstacles that we face in life! Very clear and I like how you repeated that one line!