This is so sad...I don't want them to die or wither away

I love the crayon Comparison it's just so sad

Especially at the end when they colespe

It's like a freaky hallucination!

It's just...w.O.w

This is beautiful and I love the crisp clear and blunt imagery you use! Superb! I can totally relate to this in the context of obstacles that we face in life! Very clear and I like how you repeated that one line!