Wow, this is really good and definitely very helpful. Thanks for writing it and sharing your knowledge with everyone.

Just one thing I have to criticise: . . . *building horror suspense* WHY THE HELL ISN'T THE EXAMPLE FINISHED? XD Sorry, but OMG, I was so scared and creeped out and - UGH - I was DYING to find out what happens to the teacher. THE SUSPENSE WAS KILLING ME.

Anyway, thanks for this amazing tutorial,

Krystina AVO xxx

This is amazing! seriously brilliant, so helpful!

That's actually pretty good. It's nice how you're helping people to write horror stories. Once I wrote a scary chapter for a story, and I scared someone who read it. I even scared myself writing it. Wow. Anyways, that was an awesome essay, and awesome of you!