|Reviews for The World in a Haiku|
| MissAntelope 8/21/12 . chapter 5
Just going to say that chapter 6, STARS is the best one in this collection. I love it! I think it is my favorite haiku EVER! LOVELY! I can't express it more but my GOSH you hit it perfectly
| MissAntelope 8/21/12 . chapter 6
Oh my god, the last two were beautiful. This story is the first story i am favoriting-just for those last two. Beautiful.
| mirame-99 8/20/12 . chapter 6
you updated! :D
| mirame-99 8/19/12 . chapter 4
i love haiku and your collections of it are good!
i also got inspired to write some poems because we were studying poems. some poems i published were from last year, but some were this year too! haha, anyways, will you be updating soon? :)
| 44musicfreak44 3/5/12 . chapter 4
These were wonderful, I think my favourite was the third. I just love personification :)
| MirandaTam42 11/19/11 . chapter 3
Of your three this one is my favorite, nicely done :)
| MirandaTam42 11/19/11 . chapter 1
I love haikus, so I'll read these :D
This one was nice, my only suggestion would maybe say "no people in sight" or "nobody in sight". While it's technically okay for grammar to go out the window in haiku writing (is guilty) it might sound better to you if you change that.