Hello,

I must say I really like your essay. It may be short, but it tells really much and gives the reader the chance to take your essay beyond the words written down.

For me it's very easy to imagine aspects of their lives that you did not write down.

It's as if this essay has some sort of its own life, continuing to live after it's already ended.

So, well done.

However, I would recommend you to change titles. With a title chosen so carelessly I expected a truly uninspiring essay that the writer had not really been keen on writing.

Why hide behind such a title?

Tori )