|Reviews for Subway Man, A True Story|
| True Talker 1/14/12 . chapter 1
Okay, that made me think about possibilities and I would need notice as everything here is chaotic and so am I trust me.
That is why at some point I need to read - a lot less and do what I need to do, also there is the threat of him getting fed up and tossing me out.
Doing dinner somewhat helps with that. Sorry, about the negatives I am just being honest.
I do really have bills (phone), loan and I techincally NEED to work to start paying on it and etc... I will need boxes and etc... yes grocery store - free boxes...
I do LOVE your story though especially if it means a future. Which I TRUST that is what it is...
Thank you. SERIOSLY.
| EnchantedScript 11/14/11 . chapter 1
Maybe you can improve your next story by making it less obviously unlike this one? It was obvious what was going to happen, and truthfully I didn't like it at all. Maybe the next story will be better :)
| You Don't Understand Me 11/14/11 . chapter 1
"...and when you go into this door it will make you very warm."
Made my day.