|Reviews for slip|
| Punslinger 12/6/11 . chapter 1
You're right. Nothing capital here.
| J112011 11/29/11 . chapter 1
I might be reading it wrong, but this piece feels a bit like a disappointed love poem, since you mention a "you" that created a hole, and "the things you said". Possibly also secret or undeclared love, since you mention "the things I never said" and "screams I quelled".
But of course I might also be reading it wrong.
And I'm also wondering what this "oath I never kept" is about.