| Reviews for slip |
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Punslinger 12/6/11 . chapter 1You're right. Nothing capital here. |
J112011 11/29/11 . chapter 1I might be reading it wrong, but this piece feels a bit like a disappointed love poem, since you mention a "you" that created a hole, and "the things you said". Possibly also secret or undeclared love, since you mention "the things I never said" and "screams I quelled". But of course I might also be reading it wrong. And I'm also wondering what this "oath I never kept" is about. |