I love it. The whole duality of it is something I understand completely, how someone can be such a light to you, but simultaneously a pain beyond comprehension, by the loss of them or their happiness with another. Yup. Been there. Definitely fav'd. Now, technical stuff : It flowed wonderfully, with sound rhyming and untethered emotion. Good shiyit, if you'll excuse my french, keep it up. You've got a knack for both poetry and the capturing of emotion, something growing increasingly rare in these modern times.