| Reviews for The Violin |
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BuBuWinter 3/28/13 . chapter 1o_o Your dark, midear, very dark...this might sound sad but I feel more sorry for the violin than the two people XD (I decided to look you up on fictionpress as I create my characters ;P) |
Isis 47 3/13/12 . chapter 1last time i reviewed, i didn't add it to favorites. so. here i am again. |
Isis 47 3/9/12 . chapter 1 i play the violin, LOL, but i love my family. i couldn't stop reading to the very end, but i have one question: what happened to Monica? |
Pigfarts 3/4/12 . chapter 1Well. There goes my lovely slep for tonight. Haha, loved this! |
just.a.breeze.in.eternity 2/21/12 . chapter 1You have given a new meaning to the phrase "haunting music"... Now I'm so glad I picked the cello instead... O_o |
LoveIsBlindness 11/25/11 . chapter 1 AMAZING! I love slow horror stories like that! I was on the edge of my seat while reading. Keep it up :) |
WalkingShadow39 11/23/11 . chapter 1This was really cool. A tad disterbing but still really cool. How did the girl die? I wish I played violin... so you? I play piano and i lovei t, but the violing amkea sweet sound... Even if it's happy or sad. And I'm not that goo at CC so... yeah that's it. |
Lamphlite 11/21/11 . chapter 1Scary stuff... The weirdest part is my birthday Is one day after the scream of demonica. I wouldn't step into any house that was broken down and had the faint sound violin playing. Great story. Gives me the chills. |
Lamphlite 11/21/11 . chapter 1Scary stuff... The weirdest part is my birthday Is one day after the scream of demonica. I wouldn't step into any house that was broken down and had the faint sound violin playing. Great story. Gives me the chills. |
The Second Thinker 11/21/11 . chapter 1 It's rather meh when it comes to scaring me. I would focus a bit more on the characterization, since it's rather unrealistic that somebody abused by her mother for years would suddenly stand up to her like that. Other than that, it's a pretty good story. Not bad at all. |
SincereInsanity 11/20/11 . chapter 1sweet story, youre a very good writer, i would write in detail about the killing, if you would like me to, i will write it and let you use it in there, but if not, can i use this idea? pleas eplease please please? just for a like maybe... 6 chapter story? PLeasE? |
BeyondEvolandGrace 11/20/11 . chapter 1What beautiful writing. The story is so sad. I used to play the violin, but I quit going to lessons. I regret it everytime I hear or read about violins. But I do play the Clarinet in my band. I love music. And I never thought music could give someone a "name." I love that idea! I loved this story none the less. I'ma young writer and I was wondering if you had any tips for a beginner. Great job Firestorm! :) -Ch3sTr |
DON'T YOU TOUCH MY STRINGS 11/19/11 . chapter 1 Is it wrong that I want to do that to people when I'm playing my cello and they place their hands on my strings? No? Yes? Maybe...? XD Ok then... Good story! I really did enjoy it! And I get the whole, "I-wrote-something-that-scared-even-me" thing. I did it too, thrice. :D |
jasonx65 11/19/11 . chapter 1That was really good! I read it after dark. I gotta admit it is kinda creepy. I felt bad for "Demonica". |