I absolutely love your description of the hospital, and the character of Ash is intriguing. Sorry I can't be more helpful, but I've been up for about half an hour and I can't spot mistakes when I'm tired.

see you tonight :D

I have to say, I enjoy stories where the authors are very visually descriptive. I saw everything Claus saw, felt everything he felt. Despite it only being one chapter, it's a very good chapter, and I hope you intend to continue this story, as I'm interested to see where it leads.

lovely work, intriguing idea. One error I could see;

'Her breathe smelt of rotting flesh' breathe should be breath

other than that, perfect. :)