Again, this has an unusual sort of rhythm. I like how it effects the autumn imagery - it took me a second read to appreciate it, but the jerky stops seems to attribute to the dying summer and approaching winter. Almost like the crisp dry leaves that fall from Autumn trees. Some of your lines though left things to be desired. [But your beauty makes it worth it] - falls flat in comparison to the line above. It decreases the effect of the parts above and below. There were a couple more examples of that too. But overall, nice poem.

Ohana from the Review Marathon (link in profile)

This is a beautiful piece. Depressing, but with a ray of hope through the image of the rain. IDK what to say anymore... but I really like this, both the imagery and the feeling it conveys. Great job!

Another beautiful piece, I loved the imagery you used and, of course, I loved the rhyming parts! ;) I think it conveyed a feeling that fit very well with the season and was something that everyone can relate to. Very nice :)