| Reviews for Killer |
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True Talker 2/13/12 . chapter 1This is written quite well and it makes one think. Thank you for sharing this. |
IDreamOfLullaby's 12/15/11 . chapter 1you have a really good structure when you write. I love how nicely it flows :) anywho meadow frost told me to check you out and i'm glad she did. Loved it |
Meadow Frost 12/5/11 . chapter 1Wow. I really like this one, I think it is now one of my favorites. |
Eden Green 11/22/11 . chapter 1This is really good. I can definitely feel how torn your character seems to be, about being in love again. I would suggest, as your poem has a rather easy flow, then you take out the of course in 'Unless of course my best is less'. It works better without the of course. Well done! |