| Reviews for Star Rising |
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dudeitsliz 6/28/12 . chapter 22I love your story so much! It's so amazing, and you're a WONDERFUL writer :) |
Van Quatra 6/28/12 . chapter 22well, well a new set up for reviews, interesting chapter and 100 reviews, snicker, hopefully you'll get them. |
Music Read Luv 6/18/12 . chapter 210.0 oh no! what happened to Astyanax? if hera did anything, and i mean ANYTHING, to him, i will be veryyyyyyy mad! ( but very good chapter on the other hand! D i loved the kissing parts, of course ;D haha UPDATE SOON! D |
Morganvla 6/18/12 . chapter 21You can't just end the chapter like that! DO you know what you're doing to my brain? |
Van Quatra 6/18/12 . chapter 21great great chapter, very much like and and really good, this is a great series and cant wait for how it will end. |
Music Read Luv 6/12/12 . chapter 20AAHHHHHHHH! why didn't you tell us what else is with her DNA? veryyy gooddd chapterrrr byyyyy theeeee wayyyyy! D UPDATE SOON! |
Cassadaga 6/10/12 . chapter 20I thought she was 2/3 human, 1/3 demon, i didn't realize she was also Sellamicos. But I like how she was pretty cool with the news and expecting it, because so was I. I wish Clementine would just say the extra part of her DNA argh! I was not expecting that! And I like how Astyanax was interested in what she found out and maybe offended that she hadn't told him she was going to get the news. I also liked Lucy telling her not to swear! |
Morganvla 6/9/12 . chapter 20I love the quick update! Thankkkk youuuu |
Music Read Luv 6/8/12 . chapter 19 Okay, so fictionpress is being stupid and not letting me log in so if you want to reply to my comment just private message me with my account name. but really the ending? that short of a kiss, i mean sure, i still loved it but to me, it was too short. i wouldve had it been deepened then they would somehow make it to a bedroom, or couch...but thats just me and my dirty mind xD and im pretty sure she's part demon! UPDATE SOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN! D |
Morganvla 6/4/12 . chapter 19D'aww so cute! I'm thinking either part demon or something completely different. So ready for the next chapter! |
Cassadaga 5/22/12 . chapter 18I read this a couple days ago but only now I'm reviewing! I really liked it. I like how Ilisa didn't question the kissing too much, and Astyanax didn't back away after he kissed her the first time. How they weren't really embarassed about it I guess. Anyway, I was excited all the happened and I enjoyed the chapter and how Astyanax was upset with her and how you wrote that. Basically I found everyone's reactions well-written and reasonable for what's going on! |
PurpleStrawberries15 5/16/12 . chapter 18Hahaha the kiss was unexpected! although it was reallyyyy cuteeeeeee! please write more! |
Music Read Luv 5/16/12 . chapter 18LOVED IT! D finally! Finally they kissed! That just makes me sooooo excited! UPDATE SOON! ( ps: you should definetly add more of kissing scenes into the story... D) |
Morganvla 5/15/12 . chapter 18FINALLY! :D |
Morganvla 5/6/12 . chapter 17Ilisa Astyanax PLEASE :) |