That's so sad and depressing! ( ( (

I was half-expecting it to really be a dream... Awwwh!

Oh well. You're really talented, can't wait to read more!

S**t...Shivers went down my spine.

This is a beautifully written piece..I really liked it

I was SO not expecting that outcome. So saaaad! I loved it though and I think it could make for a good piece.

Continue! D