Well, at least Dani's shirt didn't all get sizzled off. That'll be quite awkward XD

my review had missings words..
-S. G

I still don't know how I feel about Deziree..maybe she's one of those bit*hes you're supposed to like? in some type of "Jerk with a heart of gold" thing? hmm whateves. She still gets on my nerves.

I like that Creature's heads represent the elements, you really don't see that in everyday mutant fiction, very creative..and speaking of elements..is it just me or is our darlin' lady going to be the next Avatar? Controlin fire and all that.

And oh LAWD, when you had put Kitten's disclamier at the top I was confused, I couldn't remember which version of Kiki I submitted. ;

I do have an account now it's I just don't feel like logning in.

Awesome follow up I was wondering how that girl got the name creature.

That was amazing! The characters all really come alive, keep up the great work!

Well this chapter was splendid. It involved a lot of action. I loved the descriptions and specially the interactions between the characters because now it seems that you actually are writing the characters instead of their introductions.
And then there was the suspense! The fact that your updates are excruciating isn't any help. I hope you have written out some of the next chapter and maybe we don't have to wait much. :) :D
Now I guess I won't be seeing any more of my characters except the villains of course. I would have loved to see them be a part of the story but I guess its okay. You've already got a lot on your plate right now with what seems like hundreds of characters.

Anyway good going!
Happy writing!
Have a wonderful day Young Mind! :P :)

Cool. I liked it. Kitten, she is just awesome. Really, really awesome. I really want a character like her to write, she seems like so much fun. Pact! I'm gonna bet $5 that the pact doesn't last. By that I mean their gonna come to blows sometime. I'll bet against anyone except you, because you write the story. I really want to know what happens next.

Training day is the name of a movie..
Hydra is kinda "ewwww" to me.

Gosh you are one great describer! Keep up the good work and humor! :) Sorry for my late review(and lame one at that :P)

Hi Penny! :) Sorry for my late review. This took me a while to read but it was fun to do.

Nice work! As always, Shadow had me giggle at the most intense moments of the chapter and that ending, oh man. I can picture it perfectly in mind. That's when you know you've really done a fantastic job. To the next chapter!

/hershey

Uh-oh, they're in trouble now!

I'm almost surprised they haven't strangled each other yet XD But they seem to be doing decently so far!

And this Fred person doesn't sound like he's the nicest guy XD

Good job homie a little filler keeps the biscuits warm.

Great work

Hydra among my favourite dragon types (unless face to snarling fangs) because they're so hard to kill :

Although why would the random girl beside Dani prepare for battle against her teammate ._. (which spawns the phrase, "Have you ever been so mad, you turned into a hydra and tried to blow up someone?") Must 'av been some hate... o:

Serpent (Fred not-Weasley-but-Basil) seems to be an... interesting character, to say the least. And Dani–YOU CAN'T DO FIRE YET, SO WHY DID YOU LEAVE A BONFIRE GOING IN THE MIDDLE OF A FOREST?!

That was fantastic, keep up the amazing work!

Awesome! Yeah, lets just ditch Derizee and Dani together, then make them fight Angus, who is in "I'm a freaking Hydra and I'm going to kill you all" mode. Yay. So, lets see where this goes next.