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sapphireshadow15 12/30/12 . chapter 1This was so creepy, so original, so amazing. I loved every second. What a horrible fate, being transformed by an artificial intelligence, eternally bound to be his company forever. Very unnerving how the AI offers digital sex. That's...just messed up. O_O Happy writing, friend -sapphire |
VelvetyCheerio 11/2/12 . chapter 1Whoa. I was concerned at first, for whoever was speaking to the narrator, and then it turned out to be AI... o: The calmness of the AI, or at least the monotony of its voice, provides such a sense of peace even as it describes the horrible things that it did. So I think that where the real horror came from was when the narrator is described as being strung up to the ceiling, his/her flesh and other organs doomed to be replaced with plastic while his/her mind continues to live on. So chilling. I liked the idea of the obsessed AI, though. It's unique, as opposed to the obsessive stalker/kidnapper. Somewhat lack on description, like where are these two exactly, but I think there's a certain sterile element about laboratories and machines that doesn't always have to be described in detail. Overall, good work! Velvet. |
Supernovocaine 6/16/12 . chapter 1This story was amazing. I don't really have any good words for it, other than that it was unsettling and hopeless-feeling. |
TheEmberRaven 2/9/12 . chapter 1I've got chills from reading this. Very haunting and creepy. I love it! |