i love this modern day take on the classic fairytale that i love!
thanks so much for this!

AWWWWWWWW

BY FAR THE BEST CINDERELLA STORY!

:) :) love the way you write

May be a one-shot but it was better than a lot of multi-chap stories. Wonderfully written, heart-touching story with a fairytale ending, sweet!

that was . But mainly interesting.
I just love how you tackle subjects as diverse as vampires and transgenders xD
Hmmm I really loved the story! But it just feels a bit unrealistic :( I feel like you tried to summarize a novel worth of story into 11k words... Especially the ending. I understand that Ethan is open minded and all that... but he was understanding all too easily... So yeah xD
It's a beautiful story, idea and characters and I think it deserved a bit more space xD a higher number of words xD so that everything would fit and be perfect like all other stories I read By you :D

But still gratz! Wonderful, really.

I've been screaming at the computer screen the entire time it took me to read this.

"Ethan, it's so obvious! Cinderella is a HE. It's Stephen!"

"Oh yeah, it's his TWIN SISTER. Believe it. My god."

I really liked this story... it made me cry.

I don't know if you've ever looked at my profile but... I am struggling with transgenderism, except female-male. And I'm straight so it makes it even weirder. I'm a girl who wants to be a guy to be with guys.

That explains my fictionpress M/M obsession, huh?

So this story touched me. I hope I can find someone like Ethan.

Thank you.

Much love,

Lil' Monster

A true story about true love but is there realy trust in the relationship is if there is little truth?

I. Love. This...so freaking much! I absolutely love that you made Stephen trans. This was just fantastic; I loved every word!

Much better ending, more realistic. It's a pity that it is so short. I love Your stories.

omg! I love this story sooo much! you did a great job and it's just perfect!

Great, now I kinda wished there's more... lol

This story is so great! Never thought I'd call a playboy like Ethan as a sweet guy XD And Stephen! Ohhh sweeeetieee!

Gret job! :D

I feel like I read the old story but I don't remember. This version is definitely solid and I liked the ending. Well I do think Ethan is a little over the top but it works for this "fairytale".

I actually love this ending more than the previous one. It feels more realistic now :)

I don't remember if I wrote a review for 'Who Was She', if not I still think that Ethan and Stephen are weird... but cute XD

I called it! I totally called it! My first thought reading the summary was that Stephan was 'Cinderella' and I was right!

This was such a beautiful story and I'm now bawling my eyes out because I'man overly emotional person /

Fantastic job on this! I really really really REALLY enjoyed it and I kinda wish there was more, lol. Once again, great job :)