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| Reviews for Gakuen SNPAO |
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   hixD 5/15/13 . chapter 6what so this is when she gets enroled?at chp6? what aboutthe other chapters flashback? |
| hixD 5/15/13 . chapter 5 GENERAL?! who da general?! |
| HixD 12/19/12 . chapter 8 I like the name koiya:) |
| hixD 12/19/12 . chapter 7 secret meetings |
| hixD 12/4/12 . chapter 4 ahhhhh new story i don't remember i shall keep reading because its intresting |
| hixD 12/3/12 . chapter 3 on to the next chp until tomarrow! |
| hixD 12/3/12 . chapter 2 i see you put it like that :) on to the next chp |
| hixD 12/3/12 . chapter 1 wow not bad i'll go to next chap now. |
| Guest 10/28/12 . chapter 9 Ohohoho this story is getting very interestinggg |
| Keroanne 8/26/12 . chapter 9 Hurr hurr, I'm a total sucker for all of the romance that's going down. (/.\) I really like Yohru and Hakoya together, I think they're a sweet comedy due of hilarity. ME GUSTA MUCHO. Ahhh, I want to know more of what's going on... why it's a supernatural story, what's going on with Reiji, who the other students are... I'm not excited do wait. D: A couple of things I'd just like to touch on is for you to not use the word "baka" in your writing. IDK, that has always bothered me when authors do that. It makes their writing seem les professional and more childish. Just use idiot. It equates to the same thing. I'd also like to touch on switching between POV's. It's really hard to have lots of different person getting the first person point of view and having it be read well. It has a tendency to throw readers in and out and is generally confusing. James Patterson gets away with it sometime because he doesn't do it too often. However, it does annoy me that he does get awy with it, because it just doesn't seem like good writing to me. I would suggest that maybe you use 3rd person for everyone but Suzuka, since she is the main character. I do like the way this story is going and I can't wait to read more! I also want Hitomi to end up with Mr. Mysterious... XD |
| Alyksandra Barqada 8/6/12 . chapter 9 I LUUUUUUUUV THIIIIIIIIIIIIIIS! I KANT WATE FUR MOAR. XP |
| Guest 7/29/12 . chapter 8 Awh this chapter is so sweet . I cant wait to see wat awaits Suzuka at school and after seeing her childhood friend- OR *cough* lover *cough* . hehe . Please Updatee Sooon! Cant wait to see wat happens next! :) |
| Guest 7/23/12 . chapter 1 Great storylinee! |
| Guest 7/23/12 . chapter 3 Yohru my favorite character 3 |
| Guest 7/23/12 . chapter 6 Omgg! I love ur stories *.* ! i love the storyline and the principal's part i thought she was going to forget about the middle door and go to some other door haha. i would like to see what happens if she went to the other door hahaha. and the school really gives me a rich big beautfiul school feel. Good job! i love ur stories. i shall stalk you 8D |
