love it plz ud soon XD

ehe, good chapter! And I admit, it is kinda short - for you. My chapters are always so short! The shortest was only 387 words, including head and footnotes! But yeah, the story's really good, and you've mostly stopped putting more than one character's dialogue in one paragraph! You keep writing, I'll keep reading! (o)

This chapter doesn't suck! Don't put yourself down like that! I really like how mysterious everything is, though I would NOT be able to deal with all that secrecy. Smack him :P

Anyways, amazing chapter! (though it still kinda reminds me of twilight, the character's personalities are so similar)

eeek! Forbidden love! Classic :P

yay! you updated! you're story's really good, even if it's similar to Twilight. I suggest you try to make some of your paragraphs shorter, because it's kind of hard to keep your place :/ especially when you have more than one person talking in a paragraph.

super cute3 but reminds me of Twilight? Just a bit...

aww, it's so cuute 3