This story deserves more reviews. I only began reading this yesterday and I finished just now! I was surprised that the story only had four reviews when it was a fantastic piece of literature(I guess that's what you would call it).The characters are great and the plot is amazing. I look forward to the next chapter and can't wait to see what happens next. Update soon!)

Your story is quite fantastic! I've enjoyed reading thus far and look forward to the rest. Your plot is intriguing and your characters well-rounded.

great story!

A very interesting read so far. The descriptions are very well rounded and the characters are fasinating.

I think you are very talented.

I really like your descriptions, I can really imagine the scenes in my mind.

The scene with her dancing in the clearing was one of my favourites!