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ForeverBehindTheImpression 1/20/12 . chapter 1I love the bad and good to this. That even if someone doesn't treat you perfectly, you still miss them. Love's a funny thing. The part about going to the bathroom and vomiting reminded me of something that happened to me the night before my ex and I broke up :/ Loved this. My favourite lines have to be: "i remember seeing a picture of your ex wearing the same shirt and every time i wore it i couldn't help but wonder if when you looked at me, you saw her." Keep writing :) |
Jenny Sue 12/20/11 . chapter 1Really beautiful poem, with lots of little snapshots of memories and emotions, lovely. |
if i fall 11/29/11 . chapter 1that was...amazing. i felt so many emotions reading that. really well done. thank you for sharing. |
cultural 11/28/11 . chapter 1this is beautiful. |