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| ForeverBehindTheImpression 1/20/12 . chapter 1
I love the bad and good to this. That even if someone doesn't treat you perfectly, you still miss them. Love's a funny thing. The part about going to the bathroom and vomiting reminded me of something that happened to me the night before my ex and I broke up :/ Loved this. My favourite lines have to be:
"i remember seeing a picture of
your ex wearing the same shirt and every
time i wore it i couldn't help but wonder
if when you looked at me, you saw her."
Keep writing :)
| Jenny Sue 12/20/11 . chapter 1
Really beautiful poem, with lots of little snapshots of memories and emotions, lovely.
| if i fall 11/29/11 . chapter 1
i felt so many emotions reading that.
really well done.
thank you for sharing.
| cultural 11/28/11 . chapter 1
this is beautiful.