Hmmm...interesting. The beginnning certainly was, at least, haha.

It seems like it's a lot more complicated than it seems.

Good luck and update soon!

You say it's depressing and things, but it's not so bad really. I liked it. :) I like how we're kinda dumped into the middle of a scenario in the kinda middle of the story, left wondering both what happened before and what's gonna happen next. I'm intrigued. :)

I was singing that song this morning. :) While I was supposed to be revising for the history mock exam we had earlier, cos I suddenly realised I'd revised one topic but not the other... It was hard. :( Anyway. I like the significance of it in the chapter. And I just generally like the song... :)