| Reviews for Brooding Guy, Quiet Girl |
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VJ-san 7/17/12 . chapter 10Now I feel bad for Alice. Poor girl. |
VJ-san 7/17/12 . chapter 9Poor Reiji. That's all I really have to say about this. Although I do like the character development that happened in thia chapter. -w-b |
VJ-san 7/17/12 . chapter 8Heeehee, womanly ways equal blackmailing? Ha! And Reiji having no last name? Will that come into play? And, before I forget, that mecha anime Suzaku keeps talking about; your other story? Shameless promoter you! Anyways, good chapter. |
VJ-san 7/17/12 . chapter 7Dude! Reiji can cook? My kind of man, jk. But yeah, cosplaying cafes sound awesome! I also like sleepy head Alice and the cliffhanger at the end was great. |
VJ-san 7/16/12 . chapter 6This chapter was super funny! I get the feeling that Shion actually doesn't like her flat chest. And Reiji and Alice, where will their relationship lead? Hm? Also, the end! The end was also very funny! Masaya getting his own spin off story, I also love how you just made the typo apart of the story. On to the next chapter. |
Guest 7/16/12 . chapter 5 Why do you always eavesdrop when all you hear are bad things. Haha, it's funny though. Alright, I wonder what Shion was worried about at lunch and why is Alice molesting Reiji? I DEMAND ANSWERS! But yeah, good chapter. |
Lord Slayer 7/16/12 . chapter 1You need to work on your clencher line. The first line or paragraph should be something, an event, a line, a thought, a description, anything, that grabs the reader's attention and makes them want to keep reading. The clencher for this story was not particularly attention grabbing. I would also recommend that you not put thoughts in parenthesis. I found them a bit distracting. However, the ending was pretty cute and silly, so good work on that. |
mjinx 7/16/12 . chapter 1Okay, finally found time to read this story. Let's see, first off, this is really FUNNY. How you deliver narration really cracks me up. The whole thing is written well and the flow is just perfect. The characters are also INTERESTING. Following my shoujo fan instincts, I'm pretty sure Reiji and Alice are the canon pair. No protests from me, though. We'll see how this story goes. I really like this chappie though._ |
Lolitroy 7/13/12 . chapter 11Yaaay this has made me crack up so far haha I'm gonna make it a favorite :D |
KayKatastr0phe 7/12/12 . chapter 1hehe :3 This is cute. I'd stay up to read more but I have stuff to do tomorrow ._. [faves] |
TheCrimsonTears 7/12/12 . chapter 12 Gurgle gurgle laugh. Demon Lord Reiji! Haha |
TheCrimsonTears 6/30/12 . chapter 11Yayyyy! An update! Your story was as hilarious as usual! Can't wait for the Reiji special... * HAPPINESS* |
Lilliozwest 6/19/12 . chapter 10:D Yay! an update! Nice chapter! Update when you can please! |
Darklightningstorm 6/16/12 . chapter 10I vote for Shion. |
TheCrimsonTears 6/15/12 . chapter 10 Congrats on the 1000 hits! I hope its good motivation for you to keep writing my fav story! Can you put my vote in for a special Reiji story? |