|Reviews for The Redemption of Buikhu|
| savedbygrace94 2/10/12 . chapter 1
very well written story that gave an atmosphere that held true to the ancient people. I felt the ending was a bit of a letdown, however, because it had to much potential for an ending with a moral. For your next story, i would advise looking at the plot you have written and seeking for it a deeper meaning to bring it to the next level.
best of luck,
Saved By Grace
| blackraven88 12/27/11 . chapter 1