|Reviews for The Gem Saga: Book I Fire|
| Vengeful Authoress 1/14/12 . chapter 13
THAT WAS AWESOME! WOOOOOOOOOOAH!
| Vengeful Authoress 1/7/12 . chapter 8
Dun dun dun! And the mystery deepens! Ha ha, awesome
| Vengeful Authoress 1/5/12 . chapter 6
yuuri's cool, i hope she comes back. will she come back?
| love-peace-hugs 12/26/11 . chapter 13
I love your ending! This was such an amazing story to read :)
| Juliet Scar 12/22/11 . chapter 13
Ekkkkkkkk! This should be published and put on a shelf! But AM I GLAD IT WASN'T... because if it was... I might have missed out on this AMAZING story! The best story I have seen on here! Ekkkkk! Hehehehee! Ah! Love it! Book 2 better be put out soon... OR ELSE. Just kidding! But PLEASE update soon! I might actually die of anticipation if you don't! You are a GREAT writer! During the story of mind was wandering everywhere! In the beginning I was like "OMG Rik and fire girl over here should totally get together!" and then at that one part I was like "OooOoo Oh. My. GODS! Zi is Cody, right? RIGHT?" Hehehee. Please don't kill Zi! Ohhhhh! I hope Zi and them band together! Greatest job ever... seriously. Hope you update soon!
| Vengeful Authoress 12/17/11 . chapter 3
nice fight scene, well done. i like the name ambi, it reminds me of a pokemon. which one was that...? the one with the hand on its tail. amphi? ambi? grr, i can't remember
| Vengeful Authoress 12/17/11 . chapter 2
this is an awesome story! where'd you get the idea for it?
| XsaekostarX 12/17/11 . chapter 3
Very interesting chapter, but I'm sorry to say that at the moment. I can't sit still for very long... and my attention span has decresed rapidly recently... so I don't know when I'll be on my computer long enough to review again. But in general good chapter. Good explanation, believable reactions. :) Great job. :)
| david the scottish werewolf 12/16/11 . chapter 1
yay finnally i got to review, i read whole story and then forgot to leave reviews, so yeah sorry
| XsaekostarX 12/2/11 . chapter 2
Good second chapter, strong writers voice and good character development. The new characters seem interesting. Does Xia have a specific trait? Like OCD or something about her personality that makes her unique? Play that up. Play the crap out of it, becuse it's that that'll make Xia pop! I really enjoyed this chapter. Good job! Well, I'm going to carry on reading now. :)
| XsaekostarX 12/2/11 . chapter 1
Very interesting first chapter, if this were the first chapter of a book, I'd be hooked. My only CC is that, I wou'd've preferred a bit more dialogue but even then, there was still a good balance. I really enjoyed this chapter, and now I'm going to carry on reading this interesting story. :)