wow, i really enjoyed this a lot, especially how you wrote it in the perspective of the ice burg. the last lines are haunting- in a good way, haha.

catherine :)

this is so emo lol i luv it write more!

but all jokes aside, this is striking. especially the fifth line, and also "driveway, you just drive away", which is not extremely clever wordplay but works, here.

Wow. This poem was so deep.I never ever thought of writing in the ice burgs point of view. That was simply unique and you did such a great job! My favorite line in this was "crying into your shadow" I just really like the imagery that went along with this.