Reviews for Leviathan!
Pygmy owl 1/21/12 . chapter 11
Awww they sure do know how to take care of their villains. Hehe.
kati'mtl 1/21/12 . chapter 11
Unfortunately, I need to agree with you about the lack of chemistry between Levi and Troy. I can't imagine them being together... like ever. Of course the idea of Levi/Rage is even more disturbing *shudders*. Paradoxically, I'm totally for Kraken/Volt. At least to give them a chance. I mean, Leviathan is great, strong character, but somehow he lacks something vital to be a the main protagonist in a romance-flavored story. Or the story lack proper man for him. I imagine he would be good with someone, who wouldn't feel the need to dominate him, and to prove how much of a MAN he is. Someone more levelheaded that Troy (I won't even mention Rage, cause that man practically creams "I'm narcissistic sociopath").

Btw, it's kind of funny that Levi and Ken have great chemistry, only of brotherly kind. I love them together.
yebisu 1/21/12 . chapter 11
i was surprised to find that rage isn't all for leviathian. and troy is kind of persistent to levi. with the story going on, it's like levi is a kind of go with the flow guy. the hot tub gift is funny and sweet if you look at it in anotherway. anyway, i'll still be waiting for updates. :D good luck with school!
RedValley 1/21/12 . chapter 11
Lol hottub? If they want one, they should go with a ski mask and back sweater. Funny I thought Rage was all into levi and only Levi. Funny thing, I start School on monday :) Am I correct to say you go to a CalState? Yea, I agree there seem to be a lack of chemistry from Levi to Troy. I think in time Levi will mellow out and Troy will stop being so persistent then it might work out.
JtheChosen1 1/21/12 . chapter 11
The last line made me crack up - Levi just has to get the last shot in lol.

Great work here, I cannot wait for another chapter (hopefully!) soon.
UniversalStratum 1/20/12 . chapter 10
I must say, this story is hilarious! _
ricemidget 1/20/12 . chapter 10
OMG thats crazy! a ring? I can't wait to read the next chapter!
Faust 1/19/12 . chapter 9
Thank the goddess you update often. They are the high lights of my week.
Caitlyn Green 1/19/12 . chapter 10
Amazing! I can't wait until new chapters come out :D
ainoa 1/19/12 . chapter 10
It has been ages since I last found a series I had to read at one go, but this was definitely one of those. It's hilarious and hot and fun and I can't wait to read more! I just adore Troy with his high morals which he sometimes has trouble keeping to... Also, I love that you've taken some old comic book clichés and used them in this, they make the story absolutely amazing. Thanks for writing this and I hope there's more coming soon! :)
ZombieJane 1/19/12 . chapter 10
I love your story : You just create a entire new dimension with a convincing mix of sea monsters and superheros. woh. Your MY hero right now! Nice work on the characters (it's like you know them) and the story line is more than great. 'cant wait for the next chapter!

Thank you really much for sharing your imagination with us.

PS. sorry for my bad english, I can read in english but for writing, I'm still better in french... Need to work on that...hn
IslandAmoeba 1/18/12 . chapter 10
You have no idea how you just made my day. Well, I suppose you could. You did write this story. ANYWAYS, simply AMAZING. Pure, pure, pure greatness. I love the whole superheroxvillain get up, and the characters are just awesome. I love the plot structure and EVERYTHING. Don't ever give it up. Please. Because this is going to be one of the stories where I just keep going back to read over and over again because it's just that great. Yes. Shorthandedly, I love it. Keep writing. For me and all your other bajillion fans out there.

:)
Pandora's Jar 1/18/12 . chapter 10
I've been following this for a while and I am sorry I didn't drop a line for any of the last few updates. Just want to say you are doing an amazing job! The quality of the writing and the characterization so far is spectacular.
TerraDeeEarth 1/18/12 . chapter 10
to RoughDraftHero

Very entertaining and original story so far, I hope to see more of it.

terra
Blue Devil012 1/17/12 . chapter 10
Aww, going to miss your frequent updates but I understand at the same time. I just got back to university recently so I'm a little swamped xD But as always, when you get the chance, can't wait to read more! :D Rage tried to put a ring on it! XD
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