Wow... just wow.
A lot of emotion behind this, and that's great. Well written
It kinda got to me, made me really think.
I like (not actually 'like' per say) the stories of why she's doing what she is doing, adds to the emotion even more

This is so sad... I was crying.

Great job, Loom. :D Sorry about your friend though. :(

Kisses.

Great job Illumi! :D

Such a happy review is awkward in the midst of such a sad poem...