Lol, Sarah? Any reference to our Sarah? Certainly sounds like her :) (well, at the beginning, until it got all vamipire-y)

All nice and spiritual, you feeling more spiritual lately?

lovelove,

-n

Are you home today too? I have a study day :) (whether I'm studying or not isn't the point...)

Anyways, so much arguing! And whining! I didn't actually mind this chapter though :) (Oh Noes! Nia actually likes a chapter with Quinn in it, what is the world coming too?)

I liked the rum and tea reference :)

Side notes: Very hard to actually cut to kill with a razor (trust me, I know), it'd probably better if she used a carving knife/kitchen knife.

Also, drowning is one of the worst ways to go (again, trust me, I know my shizz), if she was going to drown, make her OD on something (sleeping pills perhaps...)even a small OD so she just loses consciousness, add in some alocohol (really, this girl is going all out...) and then jump in the river, that way you could be certain she'd drown. Most people who'd attempt to drown would at least drink or take pills, because drowning isn't most people's choice when they decide to kill themselves. People want it over quickly.

More notes: Girls are actually more likely to attempt suicide than guys, but also in more non-lethal ways. Like boys choose more definite ways, like guns or hanging themselves. Girls are more likely to OD.

Haha, yeah, I'm fine and mentally stable

I've missed moments like this between Quinn and Drew, and this chapter was the perfect time to remind us of their friendship, and how Drew really is a killer...

your description was great, especially in the beginning. great job!

Interesting chapter. I love the banter between Quinn and Drew, and that we see a darker side of Quinn at the end...can't wait for more!

brilliant chapter. I love the changes you are making with this draft-the added emotion and description, that gets us even deeper into the story, and deeper into what Quinn is thinking and feeling...amazing. I love that Lucy has a more central and focused role in the story as well. can't wait to see what happens next!

Great chapter, as per usual. Keep up the awesome writing.

Awesome chapter as per usual!

epic and sad and...wow. AMAZING. You're writing has really improved with this draft, and how you handled the emotions, the tension, the description, and the pacing of events shows it. great work

YOU MUST UPDATE THIS STORY! IT IS MY FAVOURITE IN ALL OF THE FICTIONPRESS ARCHIVE!

I love how your charactures aren't perfect little shits. They have issues, but they deal with them, it's good. I love this story. I just KNEW Quinn would fall for Drew! But please don't make anything too mushy...

yay! you updated! Loved this chapter, it was a great character development one for Quinn. Nice to see her not so worried about Drew or Lucy and Rose, and a little frightening to see her on the wild side, but that is who she is. Fantastic job writing this! you nailed it! can't wait for more!

I love the easy banter between these two, and Quinn's conflicting emotions, although just from a formatting stand point, if you made the dream in italics, it would have been easy for the reader to understand that it is a dream. just a thought. can't wait to see where you take this!

Well. That nightmare bit was scary (and similar to Harry Potter, book 5). But it took a while to get to the important part of the conversation. You should isolate Quinn and Drew somewhere so no one can spy on 'em.

sorry it took me so long to review this...

as usaul, awesome chapter :D love all the tension between the characters. keep it up!

aah! EPIC. you're writing has really improved lately and this latest chapter showcases it beautifully. amazing. although I noticed you didn't end the chapter with "my name is quinn jphnson and this is my autmun moon" not that i'm complaining about the ending or anything-it was EPIC, especielly that added part with Lucy to really step the tension up and make us want to keep reading! can't wait for more!