|Reviews for The Remedy|
| Stormfeather 2/13/12 . chapter 1
It drew me in like a fishing reel.
| Inkspilled 12/9/11 . chapter 1
I liked the beginning and how it drew you in. Your wording is well done, and the descriptions really keep your attention. Also I think the rhyming helped to make this flow nicely, though in some spots it could do with some adjustments. I thought this was a very nice little piece. :)