I understand your point perfectly, dear. Will try to proofread more now.

A fellow Grammar Nazi!

I salute you.

I'll have to say, sometimes I just read grammar-Nazi reviews on stuff and crack up because

a.) what you say is completely true, and

b.) I'm easily amused.

Kisses.

Speaking proofreading, Nia dear:

"please,proof" is missing an all-important space,

"reread" should be /re-read/ (oh, when will anybody think of the hyphens?),

"chunk of text, that's" ought to be separated with a semicolon, not a comma,

"otherwise it's starting to" would sound better as /otherwise it starts to/,

and "easier to read, thus" flows nicely when the comma is replaced by an en dash.

Ah, the irony of ranting. :P