This is pretty funny! Anyway, please update soon!

I read all of them at once... this is quite a humorous series. Write more, I love the randomness!

Hi, this is half an account speaking! I've added this to our favorites list because I liked how random it was, and the name Bob makes me laugh hysterically for some weird reason. What's strange is that I randomly chose this story to read, and in the second chapter, the secretary has the same name I have. Well, coincidence I guess. But good job! I'm enjoying it thus far...I'm pretty sure I'll like the rest even more. This story needs more reviews! It deserves them! :)

Sashalash

I'll give you $5 if you are able to make a story twice as epic.

Just kidding. I really liked this one, and expect me to review every chapter since all of them are funny.

It was good but not as good as the first though, but I still like it!

Oh my god, I laughed so hard. My favorite part was with Dave and when he said "But I love everything starting with W"

"Like the White Train" "Oh no!" You need to keep writing this was great!

Oh wow this is funny!

love this story the characters the deatail the stroy line and the title of the story!man if i was a publisher this would have been on the shelfs a long time i have a litle bit of luck here since someone is so amazing can you reveiw my story and possibly give some feed back for improvement or good thing in the story :)

Mate but this story has nothing wrong with and you shall cary on!

Well...I'm sure you probably see these kinds of complaints a lot, but this would be a lot funnier in expanded paragraph form...personally I find that the script method distracts from the actual story.

But kudos for something original :D

lols, why does Bob keep paying that guy?

lol i love these stories

3 kate

BOB THE INVESTIGATOR! I HAVE MISPLACED MY YEAST!

Epic.

Hilarity.