| Reviews for In Another Life |
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CaciaCoon 2/4/13 . chapter 1I wish I had seen the original. I always like WWll era stories, because then I can pretend my ancestors are in it... |
ruthie 12/17/12 . chapter 1 i notice you had said that you have another story called between two worlds that you have been working on and it's avaliable to read but it is not here on your profile I really want to read your story so could you tell me where I could find it |
Agagite Whispers 11/7/12 . chapter 6So glad you've updated, keep up the fantastic work! |
Labyrinth Fan 23 7/26/12 . chapter 6I loved it! Update again soon! :) |
ruthie 3/10/12 . chapter 5 I love your story it's wonderful please update |
Lea 2/18/12 . chapter 5 You have done very well with the portrayal of the characters and made the story seem lifelike,despite the historical circumstances. I look forward to reading more! |
Magnulux 2/13/12 . chapter 4Amazing! I love it. Please, do keep writing. |
nostalgiagoat 1/27/12 . chapter 5I love historical fiction. I just do. the only things I would critique is how much dialogue is in the chapters. time transitions are a bit confusing so just a bit more description would be helpful. also why does his mom call him Alex instead of Will? I do that sometimes, change my character's name in the middle of the story in the rough draft, but you should probably edit the story and decide on a name if it's public. also Eva does seem to warm up to Will very fast, of course I suppose they've been talking for a while now. finally I looooooooove this story and am very interested in reading how it all turns out. |
XxAmanda Is A Jasper's GirlxX 1/27/12 . chapter 5that was an interesting story. i cannot wait to read what happens next. please update the story soon! |
WideEyedInnocence 1/21/12 . chapter 5I've been writing a story on the same idea, a Nazi/ Jew romance! I think you write very well! There is a lot of dialogue though. The only thing I find strange is the fact Eva warms up to Will so quickly, though he is a Nazi. You would think she'd be pretty terrified of him, but that's just me:) I'm putting it on my alerts! Go check out my story if you're interested! |
corbsxx 1/19/12 . chapter 5This is simply wonderful :D Please continue it :D |
Labyrinth Fan 23 1/18/12 . chapter 5Aww! That was so sweet! I feel bad that Will has realized that he couldn't be with Eva! Annamarie doesn't deserve him! He's not some turn key! I hope he doesn't push Eva away when he's the only hope she has to keep contact with her family. No, Eva deserves a man who will take care of her and Will is the man for the job! If he gets prosecuted for Crimes against Humanity then the courts would need a good ass whooping from me! :) Awesome work! I cannot wait for more! :) PLEASE update again soon! :) |
summerof1969 1/17/12 . chapter 5I love this story so much! Please do more! |
A.Kashikoi 1/15/12 . chapter 4Update soon! I love this story XD WW2 is the most interesting War ever O_o its the one i did most research on.. |
Labyrinth Fan 23 1/13/12 . chapter 4Oooo! Dun dun dun! Hahaha! Loved it! My day has been made! I loved this chapter! You need to update again soon! :) I bet Will was flabbergasted! :) |