|Reviews for Breaking the Silence|
| i-wish-i-had-wings 3/4/12 . chapter 25
woah, asyer is getting fed up! i can't say i agree with his way of showing it, but juele sure needs to get started with his own life. if it were me, i would be out the next day. my pride would never allow me to stay somewhere i'm not wanted. i just hope zalon finds a way to go with him p
awwww, poor zalon, can't be easy liking juele xD he must be getting quite desperate by now, lol! though maybe going through fyri isn't the best way..
| i-wish-i-had-wings 2/27/12 . chapter 24
lol, the rest of the text has been very well written i think ;) and i wouldn't call anyone who is able to come up with a story like this stupid xp i feel pretty stupid myself though, only just now realizing why working at a bookshop is the perfect job for juele; every customer can read, lol.
hmm, so is juele's secret admirer zalon, or someone else? i sure hope it's zalon, i'd feel bad for him if it got even harder to get juele p
couldn't juele work part time at both the library and the bookshop? that way the library would get a helper and he wouldn't feel like he was letting his boss down...
| i-wish-i-had-wings 2/24/12 . chapter 23
zalon and library..a couple of chapters ago, i would have never thought that would happen p nice to see that he likes something so much, and something that helps him and juele communicate and get a common ground )
just noticed a little mistake in the text: "She leaned closer to him and HELPER her hand up to her mouth".
"I was developing an uncomfortable feeling that Zalon was more attached to me than I had thought." lol, that was priceless! well, he's at least starting to get a clue, too bad he doesn't seem to like it p
so there IS something mysterious about zalon's background...i wonder what?
so, was fyri just making that kind of joke where you pretend the one you're talking about can't hear you, or does she really think that juele is deaf?
| Honunjama 2/22/12 . chapter 23
I feel bad for Zalon, I really want Juele to like him.
| CalliScribbles 2/20/12 . chapter 22
*Waves mightily* And Zalon gets focused!
| i-wish-i-had-wings 2/18/12 . chapter 22
wow, zalon is a lot deeper than i thought! i never even gave a thought about whether juele was trying to make a life or not, he had a job and that was it in my mind xD and what zalon said about the library..awww
and ahrin it was! i was really tired yesterday, i kept forgetting the names while reading p
ummm, did he actually cut his..manly parts off, or is my imagination running wild?
| i-wish-i-had-wings 2/17/12 . chapter 21
i love finding stories that are DIFFERENT, not the usual cookie cutter stuff )
i really liked how you wrote about how zalon and the other guy thought he didn't want to communicate with him, when they didn't make an effort to do so on his terms. it had me feeling a bit indignant as well p
i'm glad zalon has changed his attitude, too bad juele is so oblivious p i love the name and nickname!
asyer kind of puzzles me though, it just doesn't feel like he's a big part of the story, and still they live with him.
i'm really curious as to what exactly zalon did to karvon..
loving the story so far )
| CalliScribbles 2/8/12 . chapter 20
Hi would suffice. *waves*
Thinking is a good sign, but Zalon should probably do it under some supervision, especially after what he just did. I'm not certain he's going to be proud of himself when he wakes up.
| TinaLouise 2/8/12 . chapter 20
Poor oblivious Juele.
| CalliScribbles 2/5/12 . chapter 19
Zalon has a temper. But Juele isn't exactly a person who gets wrapped up in other people - as evidenced by the fact that he hadn't even noticed that Zalon was avoiding him.
Seems like Zalon has as much to figure out as Juele does.
| CalliScribbles 2/5/12 . chapter 17
| CalliScribbles 2/5/12 . chapter 15
Asyer, why do I think that Zalon talking to you is not as good of a sign as you think it is?
| Lucy Belle 2/1/12 . chapter 18
Never. Even still, 'he's not a murderer.' Right... Look forward to seeing more of his thoughts.
Also, it's not just violence, it's anything to make the readers sit in their seat in surprise. The classic "shock factor."
Juele's work seems boring. Will he be happy with this his whole life? Because this was kinda the closest thing to a job they could find. Run his own someday?
| CalliScribbles 2/1/12 . chapter 7
Told you so. *Insert really big smirk.* And yes, I can imagine why the ever dramatic Rekeir tossed the carving into the see, and why Juele is ticked even though he hated the man, because he made that carving himself.
| Honunjama 1/28/12 . chapter 17
I really enjoyed all the hints to Juele's past involving Karvon! Wow.
I hope Zalon didn't kill him though- I still really like his character.
(about the missing word thing- no, it wasn't about Juele sign speak, that isn't going to translate perfectly I know and it works perfectly like that. It was just occasionally as I read through the older chapters)
Looking forward to your next update,