Very good. I thoroughly enjoyed the first chapter and am looking forward to the second. I'm not really sure what to say here, but I thought I should mention how much I liked it and have added it to my favorites (though it is my first favorite story as of yet). Thank you for writing it.

I have a few of my curiosity in the story and I'm alittle sad that Kai died. Oh and a little of advice, don't worry if the story is popular or not just write for own creativity. Besides I know a few stories that didn't even meet anyone's eyes, so don't feel down. Update if you wish!

Um, if u have borrowed inuyasha characters, doesnt that story belong on ?